MindCTR Kids/Cleary 2012-2013

MindCTR Kids/Cleary 2012-2013

A Poem by Cahjli Symes
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Written to: All I need by Clams Casino. This is for my friend Jorge.....pretty much my junior into one song.

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Breathe into me
Hear my heart stop
Let my lungs drop
As my heart pops
Beneath the black wave of a broken sea
As we were meant be
Wasn't meant to see
These fantasy's of you and me
I trust to see, your vanity
Narcissistic tendencies 
My enemy
Our sessions gone full circle
you said to me
I lost the trust you gave to me
I gave my word, but your calls still
drop
Coming to terms that we are not,
meant to be in society 
As we are
Young and free
Rebels of an republic army
Stormtrooper's when enemies clock me, 
Clock you
Don't stop me
What stopped you?
Brothers in arms
Die when we fall
F**k the world lets burn it all
Together we fall
Through flames and all
Day to night I try to fight 
What's into me, 
passed on to you
A drop dead kamikaze 
Born of asphalt 
 
Lost serenity 
What they took from me
As life's one fucked up tragedy 
Within in us all 
We lie as we crawl
The rats and snakes
False smiles and shakes
As they cut me up in two
 
As I died for you,
Would you die for me?
They laugh at us 
As were not happy
My feelings are sappy
My knuckles are bruised
I punched in my walls to the thoughts
of you
My wrist are blue
As my lines are red
Not crossing rivers
Went down the bank
All the days we chilled and spent

Questioning where 
the f**k did it go?
Never knew you'd be 
a hoe
As you took Mr.smith 
and kissed Mr.weston
Shot in the heart 
as I'm feeling like s**t
Fucked in the head
as I'm left here for dead

© 2014 Cahjli Symes


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RAW AS F**K. lol

I gave my word, but your calls still
drop
Coming to terms that we are not,
meant to be in society

As we are

Young and free

Rebels of an republic army
Stormtrooper's when enemies clock me, ---- Get out dude that's crazy good. lol


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cahjli Symes

9 Years Ago

thank you :D
aiming to get it recorded soon enough
joshua deathdealer

9 Years Ago

Do that bro.. And send me a link and I'll share the s**t out of it.



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RAW AS F**K. lol

I gave my word, but your calls still
drop
Coming to terms that we are not,
meant to be in society

As we are

Young and free

Rebels of an republic army
Stormtrooper's when enemies clock me, ---- Get out dude that's crazy good. lol


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cahjli Symes

9 Years Ago

thank you :D
aiming to get it recorded soon enough
joshua deathdealer

9 Years Ago

Do that bro.. And send me a link and I'll share the s**t out of it.
Jeez, yeah this is pretty hard hitting for sure.
Like a punch in the face of reality.
Nice one buddy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HOLy f**k wTF THIS is amazing omg.... WHen are you making this into a song? i finally read it with the music and omg yeah man. do this. this. is . the . s**t.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cahjli Symes

9 Years Ago

When ever you guys are ready
Damn.
The hurt and anger is so alive!
Love the big bold statement right in the middle of it, it's screams out.
It's hard to use profanity in poetry and not having it taking over the whole piece and washing out the real intention of using it in the first place, but you use it gracefully. I love that.
Wonderful piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cahjli Symes

9 Years Ago

thank you lol i guess theres an art to profanity XD
Cahjli Symes

9 Years Ago

this was actually intended to be the first rap piece I've ever written
Wynter Page

9 Years Ago

Haha yes there is xD, and I can tell lol

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Cahjli Symes
Cahjli Symes

Cloud City, FL



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