Love Killer

I am comparing a rose to a relationship.

Flower at night

Flower at day

Never thought you'd die one day

Gave you rain

Gave you shine

Never thoguht you go wild that day

Held you close

Held you tight

Didn't know you'd leave out of sight

Bleeding grip

Dripping holes

Healing slow

Didn't know you'd let me go

Author's Note

what you think?

Reviews

[Legion]

Very good comparison. You captured the situation perfectly in you analogy. Kudos.