Dance of the Fey

for a contest. the piece has to be one line long.

Wings flitting and arms spinning; the Fey have come to dance the night away.

Reviews

[Felecia]

Short, and simple, yet it completely says everything about the Fae (well not everything). Very nice

[Celestial Witch Child]

Highly short and yet intriguing in its simplicity. Great work, chickadee.

[Rhea752]

teehee chickadee :P thank you for the review :)

[Sarah W. French]

It may be a line long to it tells a story.

[Jordan A. Wilson]

paints a picture

[Owlgirl]

Wow! Great line!

[MOON]

Short sweet.

[Heromen Selena]

I like it :) Nice job.

[Tai Ryens]

Short yet long-lasting in terms of imagery. I like this.

[ewest1220]

I think this'll do well. Good luck!

[Rhea752]

i actually got my first contest win and they're going to publish it into a magazine. :P i'm all excited now.

[ewest1220]

NICE!!! Is this your first time being published?

[Rhea752]

ya. i could have done it last year for my school but i was wimpy

[ewest1220]

That's awesome! I've been published a few times so I'm excited you got your first taste :) hopefully you'll win more contests!

[Rhea752]

Thanks :D

[Archia]

This makes me want to be there dancing actually. I love how this brings that forward, nice one line.

[Rhea752]

thank you :)