That Devil in Disguise

That Devil in Disguise

A Poem by Rhea752

Golden sunlight 
And glittering azure ponds 
Lush green trees 
And fragrant flowers 
Cleverly disguise 
The sorrows of this park 

Inhabited by night are 
The shunned and the wary 
The unloved and the weary 
Inhabited by day are 
The happy smiling families 
The ones who refuse to see 

That's okay 
Keep plastering on those smiles 
Speaking those lies 
And pretending you can't see 
That Devil in Disguise

© 2012 Rhea752


Author's Note

Rhea752
I know it's not that great. Hope you enjoy it anyways.

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How can you say this isn't good? This is wonderful. You've practically spoken how everyone in the world, pretty much were's a mask at some point. We may think we see someone special, or someone kind, but we could be wrong. We may see someone creepy and mysterious and think instantly "BAD GUY!" but we could be wrong. You can see through the mask, unless you crack it.
Great poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

Thank You :D



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This is nice. Don't sell yourself short. You placed in the contest. Congratulations. Eileen

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
How can you say this isn't good? This is wonderful. You've practically spoken how everyone in the world, pretty much were's a mask at some point. We may think we see someone special, or someone kind, but we could be wrong. We may see someone creepy and mysterious and think instantly "BAD GUY!" but we could be wrong. You can see through the mask, unless you crack it.
Great poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

Thank You :D
I really like this! Often, we try to cover things up that we don't want to know about or see. It's what makes our planet less honest and worse-off in the end. You did a great job at saying that with this poem. Great!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

Thank you :D
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This is good :) It has a lot of emotion and meaning in it. Awesome write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


thought provoking

Posted 11 Years Ago


Not that great O.o........ This is great and you know it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

Thank you for all your reviews. :D
Man, I love where you took this. The contrast of the people from night to day, it's awesome. Very much enjoyed this!

Posted 11 Years Ago


What do you mean "it's not that great"?!?!
It's amazing! I love the imagery and the ending is very effective :)
Well done ^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

11 Years Ago

thank you very much :D
Like this very good last line.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Superb write :))

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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