Suicide

S-tory of my life 

U-nderstand 

I-t's not my 

C-hoice 

I-t's been 

D-ecided for me by 

E-veryone else

Author's Note

first real acrostic... this about bullying... people have ended their lives because other people decided to make their lives miserable

Reviews

[Felecia]

As you mentioned the bullying, it made me think of the recent suicide of a girl named Amanda Todd (died on wednesday), who's story appeared in the paper today, and I read while I was working, since the place I work at was selling that paper. I was having a bad day that morning and looking at that, I almost burst into tears in front of some constumers. I was actually thinking about posting some youtube video's of me, singing some song in honor of those who are being bullied, and have or are thinking about suicide. Thank you so much, Rhea, for creating this poem and dedicating it to those who are being bullied. You've just brightened my day some more.

[Rhea752]

I hate that this happens all the time. This was actually dedicated to a friend who is undergoing bullying; I wish I could help more... seriously considering kicking the bully's butt.

[Felecia]

I say yes, to kicking the bullies butt, but then you'd be no better then to bully, right? If you ever need help or advice with this, just message and ask alright?

[Rhea752]

Yeah.... i'm just being a little protective. thank you for the review :D

[Baby Ricochet]

Powerful poem. Great job

[Kacie Delane Davis]

creative, i like it. It's has a unique style to it in my opinion.
Keep Writing :)

[Blue Belle]

It's different. Nice job. Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

[ewest1220]

Wow! I'm not usually one to like Acrostic poems (I had one I wrote not to long ago I still don't like it) but this is an immensely powerful read. Thank you so much for sharing this Rhea! This one is going onto my favorites!

[Rhea752]

Thank you very much :)

[Amila Jay]

Well written !! Nice work :)

[Aehr]

i agree wholeheartedly with your author's note. i lke this one. powerful.

[MOON]

Thought provoking write well expressed

[NathanBlackie]

yeah, it's funny how people choose suicide when justice says homicide is the right choice... it's not really funny. but I like the poem.

[Rhea752]

thx :)

[The Random Writings Of ..]

This is so powerful, the format makes it phenomenal. I too am glad you brought this up in regards to bullying. It is so sad that this has become such an epidemic that kids and even some adults have no where to turn except to suicide. The last three lines were the most haunting for me. Because I think that this is how it must feel. This is an excellent write. It should be shared, the message is so powerful!
Kates

[Rhea752]

Thank you :)

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

You are welcome!

[Melody]

This is so strong. I really liked it. I've never personally known anybody who have committed suicide but I have a lot of friends who have contemplated it. This means a lot. Great job, Rhea.

[Rhea752]

Thank You :)

[Melody]

You're welcome.