Waiting All Alone

about a raven waiting for his mate and she doesn't come

"Quark Quark" 

The raven calls 

Out in the night he cries 

Singing a doleful song alone 

He waits

Author's Note

this is a cinquain.... so ahhhhhh let me know what you think

Reviews

[Rahul]

"RAVEN'S're wonderful or may not be wonderful", but to me RAVEN'S were nice but there were something bad with them so that they became bad and called Raven's, so, if they became bad fortunately or unfortunately ( i don't know) then they became bad to/for me as well because good one's always got what's right and truth always win from bad sight...that's what i'd learnt from my last years.
This's really a great write and i don't want to read more beccause you've already said enough about this piece nad have already cleared my doubts by this piece. I even didn't know such kinda talent you have.

[Celeste]

Ravens are wonderful creatures. This kind of reminds me of Edgar's poem, The Raven, when the bird speaks "Nevermore." c:

Short but powerful. Great job!

[Lina Grey]

Ravens can be brilliant poetic subjects. This is a beautifully inspiring piece, you can say so much in so little! Thank you.

[♥ Kinnixk]

Beautiful little write. :)

[Pikachu]

I like it.

I actually made the "Quark Quark" noise outloud a bit and my brother looked at me like, wtf?

Very nice writing skills you have. c:

[CrimsonBlaze]

Cinquain? Oh my gosh I remember doing these in class. Well, even though it's short, (like I think it's supposed to be, if I'm correct.. -tries pulling info from tiny brain-) it gives this mystifying aura....I dunno....Ravens....They're just so majestic....And....You summed it all up in that poem :D

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

ahh....quite a sensitive capture of a sensitive feeling..

[Sasha]

Short and sweet.

[Jock Engelman]

wow so well written in such a short verse, feel free to be my critic