Stillness

Stillness

A Poem by rhythm&blues

Something about the way the words move

quietly, creeping up on my ears

my soul takes flight for I have found

that simple niche inside my heart

© 2013 rhythm&blues


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Short and simple poem with lots of meaning underneath. Very sweet!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like the brevity simply meaningful

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice and simple but profound capture of this discovery.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This made me all fuzzy inside lol sweet but simple, a really great write! I enjoyed it! Keep it up :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Wow that's my first fuzzy, thanks! :)
This is how I felt when I discovered a bit of a knack for word smithery.

A good, simple poem with warm honesty.

Keep up the good words.

More reviews inbound!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Samuel, I will visit you soon too, enjoy your weekend.
wonderfully expressed, this is a piece of cold reality, which exudes a strange sense of warmth.

Posted 10 Years Ago


rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thank you quinfinn.
Simple niche inside my heart

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
There is a certain bliss in your words, finding that perfect place of peace. Everything here gave me a beautiful sense of quiet.

If you go, go in peace it makes the flowers sweeter along the path. ~Mike Dolan

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review and including the sweet quote also.
Simple, sweet yet carrying a very large message. Nice things often come in small packages. Very nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thank you again Jack, such a talent as yours, I'm elated that you are reading my poems.
Jack...

10 Years Ago

No problem. Just let me know when you write something new.
i heard once that brevity is the soul of wit

and i believe that finding just exactly the right words and spaces when i build a poem is akin to wordless monks who labored unceasingly for ages in their life's work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thank you, is that true, I've never heard that before but I do agree to some extent with that statem.. read more

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