"Summer Morning's"

"Summer Morning's"

A Poem by richieb
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"Lazy Days"

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SUMMER MORNING’S

 

Lush green grass

bending

 

Clear stone creek

gurgling

 

Cool gentle breeze

whispering

 

Tree top birds

singing

 

Warm friendly sun

smiling

 

Soft puffy clouds

floating

 

Ocean blue sky

beckoning

 

I lay content

dreaming


© 2016 richieb



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Short but really descriptive. I especially liked the second and third stanzas, as well as the last two. I thought that those four stanzas really drifted me to the place itself, what can I say? Well done.
Calming could be the word for this poem...
Have a nice day :)

Regards,
Mira.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

richieb

2 Years Ago

Thank you Mira, I appreciate your comments. After a long winter, calming is a great.. read more



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KAJ
Visualizing is a priority when I read poems, I could not only visualize your Summer Morning but I could feel it too. So few words for such a great poem :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

richieb

6 Months Ago

KAJ,
Thank you for the review. I could use a summer.. read more
richieb,
"summer morning" was a call to the heart of humanity. "Set aside your angst, stress and falsehood and be re-energized.
We seem to simply be in need of healing in so many ways and the place of peace outside the door.
Sitting under a tree, or just enjoying a potted plant or fish in a tank. Even these help I think. Maybe i am grasping a little but that's just my take. Bless you Kathy. PS I was reading my first poem, Soda crackers and saw that I had not reviewed you in a while. thanks for this early write of yours. Very refreshing.............

Posted 1 Year Ago


richieb

1 Year Ago

Kathy,
I welcome you as a friend and look forward to exchanging .. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

richieb,
I like the history you've given for this poem; very nice! We all just do what we do .. read more
richieb

1 Year Ago

Kathy,
I am excited to share stories of God's Love .. read more
A amazing poem. You took the reader to beautiful places and a sweet dream to be found. Thank you richieb for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

richieb

1 Year Ago

Thank you Coyote for your kind words. I respect your talent as a writer so your positive c.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I enjoyed your work also and you are welcome.
Beautiful..
You make me feel the poem..you do a very good job. Never stop. 100/100

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

richieb

1 Year Ago

Atashusi,
Thank you for your heartfelt review. I appreciate your k.. read more
I love how you wrote this, how all the adjectives are one word in relation to what they are describing!

...pretty cool!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

richieb

1 Year Ago

Thank you Kelly for your review. I am happy you enjoyed this poem.
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Short but very good..i love this..last three stanza are best and the whole poem as well. .thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

richieb

1 Year Ago

Farhan,
I am happy you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for your positive comme.. read more
This has a nice imagery to it. I especially liked the last part.
Nicely penned :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

richieb

1 Year Ago

Thank you YumnaKay, I appreciate it.
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

You're welcome, Richieb! A pleasure :)
Pale,
I am glad this poem stirred good memories for you. I was fortunate to live in a picturesque country home with a long lane that hid the house from the road. I enjoyed many a serene summer day in that setting.
Peace,
Richie b.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This reminds me so much of a day I remember from younger years. We had a field we used to play in that was perfect and full of grass. There was one day I recall most when a friend had just gotten a new dog and we were running through the field with him. With the exception of a creek, you detailed that day perfectly. Thanks for sharing this. You brought back a great memory when that field was still there and not a row of houses.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wonderful use of phrases in this very soothing and lovely poem. Any lover of nature would really enjoy this.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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