7 Days

7 days of friendship

It was the first day
I met you.
You smiled at me
And said "Hello".

On the second day, I met you again
But not the same as yesterday.
You went near me
And talked about each other.

The third day is good,
Good enough than the yesterday.
We played "Hide and Seek"
Yet you always lose.

The fourth day is better,
Better than yesterday.
We wrote each others letters
And we laughed and laughed.

Fifth day is the best,
Best of all the days.
I said my little secrets
You kept it and smiled.

Sixth day is the greatest,
Greatest of all the days.
We hanged out at the mall
And look at the things we can't buy.

These days were the greatest
Laughter, joy, trust
These are the things we felt
A true and happy friendship.

But, what happened on the seventh day?
You knew the truth...
The truth that I liked you
And that truth made us go apart

Now, we're not that close
We don't even talked to each other
Or even notice each other
Just like strangers

I'm so glad that I have a friend like you
A nice and happy guy
Who always make me smile
Yet today, made me regret and say
"I miss you..."

Author's Note

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Reviews

[rielovella]

Thanks for all of you who commented. I really appreciate it.

[maryjaneuy]

nice poem. ;)
It made me smile for the first seven stanzas.. :)
keep on writing. :D

[livinglifeloud]

This poem really show's your emotions, and tell a story. It is very good.

[Yani De Los Reyes]

Aww. This poem describes a lot about certain things. From good to bad, i guess we can't avoid the way of life. Good job!