Promise

Promise

A Poem by rielovella
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"I promise"

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An overused word

Everyone says that

“I promise.”

But keep on breaking it.

When will people use it

And follow it

It is better to do it

Than to say your promises and break it.


© 2010 rielovella



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agree. but not all promises were made just to be broken. :)
nice read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


A mans word is his bond

Posted 3 Years Ago


I agree with this because that always happens and people seem to think they can because they think other people are made of paper or plastic. Or that they don't have feelings. It is a good message :)

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on March 22, 2010
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rielovella
rielovella

Muntinlupa, Philippines



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I'm Liriel. 15 years old girl living in Philippines I like writing stories about love(especially about S.H.E. and Fahrenheit. In short, fanfic. :) ) and poems(if I'm inspired). I write likeS.. more..

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