Dance in the Rain

Dance in the Rain

A Poem by Rie Sheridan Rose
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for Gandre

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Dance in the rain
to the Spring symphony.

Drown in the wonder
of the liquid universe.

Embrace the blind poet
within your translucent soul.

Create with your heart
until you learn to see.


© 2008 Rie Sheridan Rose



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Thank you for sharing your poem. It reminds me of the Bob Dylan quote, "some people feel the rain, others just get wet." Though your poem is short, each words seems deliberately chosen and creates great imagery of carefree dancing in the rain.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Simply Stunning! Enjoyable read!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Fluid (no pun intended) and picturesque. Imagery is superb.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how it is short and to the point maybe you caould add a little somthing likemaybe it needs somthing but i love it anyways

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

very inspiring, a symphony is so completely capturing of rain, spring,
and the 'liquid universe" very powerful in itself description,
I can visually and tentavely feel you poem, Rie, absolutely lovely,

---mishel

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely beautiful!

jkb

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Rie Sheridan Rose
Rie Sheridan Rose

TX



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I'm a Texas girl, born and bred. I have a bachelor's degree in Technical Theater, and another in Asian Studies. Learning is one of my favorite hobbies. :) I am the eldest of four sisters, and that was.. more..

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