its you

to all the people who are deeply in love

When I look at you,
I realize life is blue;
like the ocean- deep,
 but smooth.
When you whisper
 in my ear,
I pause,
as every single word
fall on my ear.
And when you breathe
I am more alive,
And as you hold me tight
making me feel
safer than ever.
It’s when you sing to me
about all those little and,
sweet memories we share
makes me to blush.
When our eyes meet
dancing to the music
flowing slowly,
you know,
 it’s your smile
that makes my love stronger
with every passing moment.
 Wish I could treasure
all these togetherness of ours.
Wish I could just
hold you tight
so firm forever.
No matter how far we are,
I’ll be waiting for you.
I promise to stand beside you,
in all the hardships of life.
It’s you, only you,
will always be you
for me.

Author's Note

i'm not a professional and i'm just 17, still tried my best to keep it simple and mature. hope u like it. thanks

Reviews

[Hannah]

I really like your choice of words and imagery, it makes the whole piece that much more visual. I feel like you captured the essence of love quite well, good job :)

[Ankit Mahar]

The message that this poem conveyed is indeed clear and beautiful .but as a whole ,you still need to work hard brother.

[Wolfwind]

A very beautiful and sincere piece of prose. I liked the smooth even emotions with in the ink and how it remained positive throughout the entire flow. Much enjoyed! Thanks for sharing your craft!

Aaron - Wolfwind

[Quoting Ravens]

I love that is so sweet. Also kind of makes me think of a Secondhand Serenade song.