Gracious Moon

Gracious Moon

A Poem by Rin
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Gut feeling poem lol.

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Her eyes shimmering as she stares
This crystal forest absorbing the moonlight
She, as well as the elements all around her, graciously sit motionless
Only the jovious fireflies dance with the gentle breeze
Such deep blue, as if swimming in the ocean
Silence cradles everything in a cool blanket
Her roots, buried deep in the soft dirt
The fresh smell of a still lake
She smiles as the moon gently fall down
Welcoming the warmth of the sun
She slowly shuts her eyes
Quietly, the crystal forest begins to move

© 2008 Rin


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'This crystal forest absorbing the moonlight' i LOVE this line. this is such a beautiful poem such strong imagery. thanks for putting it up!

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I love to write just as much as I love to do visual arts. For a while I used to think I didn�t have a talent in writing, but after doing so many pieces I found out that I love to do it j.. more..

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