Fear Under Cold Stares

Well the formate I was using got too long but I still enjoyed writing this peom. Oh the creature is a tree if you can't tell...

 

Trembling on wet grass

Her fragile body sweating

It circles with gentle footsteps

The moon red the sky a deep purple

No light she is alone with this creature

It snarls with a set of sharp yellow teeth

Curled defenseless and broken she lays waiting

Waiting for it to finish her, it screeches, back hunched

Speed noise its footsteps so close she yelps blood splashing!

Its eyes fierce as its roots break her thin bones, thorns slashing

Unfamiliar sounds escape its distrusting mouth teeth biting down

Biting on anything it can making sure she can feel it her body breaking

She yells in great pain as her body goes limp, released she lay in wet grass

Revenge the creature has had for its family as well as for its kind survive it shall

Returning to the ground of the blood soaked grass teeth turning to vines still movement

It stands over her blue body straightening, leaves blooming over blood grass moving like worms.

Slowly she becomes stiff brown; bark vines piercing her limp figure slowly she stands eyes no longer eyes

Together they stand waiting for revenge dancing revenge for their lost ones they will taste fresh water soon in light

Reviews

This is very good. I liked the form. It worked well for this poem! Great write!

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I think this form really worked well. I loved the descriptiveness in your writing. Very good!

[(*^.^*)Vivi(*^.^*)]

nice choice of words...so descripive...nice work..