Imperfection is Perfect

Imperfection is Perfect

A Poem by Rin
"

To simply be human.

"

 

He is not perfect
That is why he is perfect
Imperfection is perfection
His strange attitude
His loudness
To accidentally fart
He breaks
He cries and laughs
He falls and gets hurt
He hides how he truly feels
He truly tries
I fall I burp
I break and it is hard to heal
I am beautiful
I am simply imperfect
I yell I have a temper
I get lazy I over think
I fall harder when I see I fall
I am imperfect
That is why I am perfect
You stay on the computer
When you could do something better
You continue to read
Even though you need to do something
Do something you procrastinate on
You are imperfect
You are perfect because you are imperfect
I love him because he is human
I love me because I am honest
I love you because imperfection is beautiful
The imperfections make you perfect
 

© 2008 Rin


Author's Note

Rin
Please ignore the imperfection. Ha ha, had to type that.

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Beautiful.. Very very very beautiful.
Simply perfect!
Reminded me of my writing,
"we all are perfect, just ignore what we don't have and what we can't do! "
however i wrote it in the general sense of loving all, you made it much more soulful.
I'm feeling it just the same..But It's awesome.
Love this piece.
Blessings... :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wow, this has alot of feeling to it..
it really caught my attention when i first read the title..
and i think its 100% truee..:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I simply thought it was amazingly inciteful. It borders what I think sometimes and I think orange thinks so too you should show it to her at lunch.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem! How beautiful to think like this! Not many people do! Well versed!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful.. Very very very beautiful.
Simply perfect!
Reminded me of my writing,
"we all are perfect, just ignore what we don't have and what we can't do! "
however i wrote it in the general sense of loving all, you made it much more soulful.
I'm feeling it just the same..But It's awesome.
Love this piece.
Blessings... :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great! I loved the message you wrote about. It is too bad people just can't love who they are. Very good poem! This should be read to children. I know the ones I work with could use this message told to them by someone other than me. Great work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this. It's so true in relationships, when you love someone you totally except their flaws and you realize that the person, no matter if they fart, or act silly around you, they are nothing but perfect for you in their own way. I feel the same way about my boyfriend. And I had no prob ignoring the imperfections, since to me there wasn't any. :) Keep up the good work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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