Sunrise

Sunrise

A Poem by RiverRei

Orange, red, and blue
mix in a fantastic view
of light born anew.

© 2015 RiverRei



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I have read many poems that exhalt the reborn Sun in eloquent terms but I can't remember any that focus on the actual light itself as being born anew. Its a subtle difference but one that made me go 'Wow, this is special !' - a superb poem RR and a great metaphor for hope.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Wow thanks Anto :D that means a lot to me. I thought this was just average when I posted it but I'm .. read more



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Well written Haiku River.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thanks :) I was a little obsessed with the sunrise/set at the time of writing things haha.
Terrence Chang

2 Years Ago

And you expressed it very well
It is indeed a wow poem. It's very difficult to phrase things in less words but you have done it wonderfully.
I liked the way you described sun, short ans sweet, :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)
Love the perfect use of colours in this short poem. Orange, red and blue,
The sun must be smiling at you..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Beautiful response, thank you :D
Passengerr

2 Years Ago

My pleasure..
Amazing use of description. A perfect poem dear friend.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thank you thank you!!! :D
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I don't consciously try to rhyme my haiku, but after reading this one I think I'll give it a try. A fantastic haiku for a fantastic view!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

I actually didn't try to make them rhyme until after I wrote the first two lines of this. Then I jus.. read more
This is great. A rhyming haiku that's easy to understand; can't beat that. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Wow thanks Mattavelli (I love your username btw). I'm really glad you enjoyed this :D
Very good River, I just love short, carefully worded descriptive poems. You did well with this one.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thanks very much! I've been working on it so I'm glad my practice has paid off :)
This is spectacular! I love the specific wording.. It's absolutely wonderful! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cool Girl

2 Years Ago

Youre very welcome, OCD buddy ;)
RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Hahahah OCD buddies for ever!!! :D
Cool Girl

2 Years Ago

OMG YES!! :)
short poems are amazing
they always seem to have tons of meaning by comparison to even some much longer poems

wanted to check out your work
and looks like this was a good place to start


-Dream

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thanks Dream! I like experimenting with all forms :) Long, short, rhyme, free verse. Thank you so mu.. read more
closed

2 Years Ago

youre welcome
the same for me
I see them every cloudless day and you capture it very well... it is even more spectacular to see it rise from the ocean...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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2 Years Ago

I hope you get to see it too... first the light looms on the horizon a dark blue as night disappears.. read more
skittish mind

1 Year Ago

nice poem. I think your poetic capacity is wonderful. carry on. give us more poem to read
RiverRei

1 Year Ago

Thank you, I've missed writing poetry - this might give me the motivation I need to get back into it.. read more

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