I'm Here

I'm Here

A Poem by RiverRei

Frequently used,
bent and broken.
I'm here.
Now, save me.

© 2016 RiverRei



Author's Note

RiverRei
-Awarded "Beautiful!" (or 2nd place) in the "10 words Challenge" Contest.

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a poem doesn't have to be long and complicated to be impacting. This is a good example of how something small can really be good c:
Two sentences, two parts, the last half is much like a continuation of the first.
Well written as far and the placement of words.
Great Poem! Good job (:

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Reeg, that means a lot :)
Reeg

2 Years Ago

Anytime ^~^



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This is full of great Melancholy. I like the way you have added wording here. Being a girl really could be hard, I felt some pain physically while I was going through this write. Nice job. All the best.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much. It's always interesting how pieces with few words can sometimes move us more th.. read more
Abhijeet Kumar

1 Year Ago

Agree with you.
It's always the strongest ones, the ones who are always there that actually need help the most. You said it so perfectly here.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thank you, lovely :)
Nice simple!
says it all.


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thank you!!! Sometimes the simplest of writing can say more than a huge long poem/story :)
So much emotion with just a few words. Inspired that even thou your bent and broken your still surviving, sometimes that's the hardest part. Great poem

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thanks very much :)
Don't depend on someone to save you. You have to save yourself in any kind of situation. What you need is someone to help and support you till you yourself be able to stand up and save yourself.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kshitij Srivastava

2 Years Ago

yes, correct but partially.... A disturbed person tends to expect his near ones to understand his si.. read more
kclyaine

2 Years Ago

Why would they understand if he/she doesn't communicate? What if the person lives alone? What if his.. read more
Kshitij Srivastava

2 Years Ago

Exactly my point. Either vulnerable or rational. Most of us wouldn't care about 'Why'. Now obviously.. read more
I like it!
So short, but so powerful!
Well done!
Keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Yay thanks Emily :D
river so many ways to say save me. so any ways to say broken. this is well written and u kept it short and sometimes that's the best way to say things. keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thanks Mika :) Some people try too hard to find new ways to say things when it's best at it's simple.. read more
Mika Chan

2 Years Ago

yes that's true river! :^w^
There some people who always can bent with the wind, some others always break. Thats, of course, life. Thanks for sharing a life lesson in a few lines. :) Rudi

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

You are welcome, thanks for reading it :D
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

2 Years Ago

You're welcome. :) Rudi
This is a beautiful plea to be saved... I love it. Sometimes in life we go through a lot... we bend... sometimes we break but we almost always pick up and continue. To be saved would be an awesome way to continue... good write :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thanks Aaron :D You're so sweet :)
I like the short poem. You used the language with skill. All of us need mercy and to be saved. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thank you my friend :) I have you to thank; couldn't have enhanced my skills without your support :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

We help each other and you are welcome.

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