Dancing in the Dark

Dancing in the Dark

A Poem by RiverRei

Dark shadows
dance in the night.
Shall we join them?

© 2015 RiverRei



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I guess for me the question would be decided once I knew if the shadows were good or bad. Being dark does not make one bad and if their dancing I expect they are good. I love short work. You have to be a bit more selective in work choice and your choices were excellant. Thanks,

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Willard, for the amazing review :D It means a lot to me :)
Confused Canteloupe

2 Years Ago

A dance is not always considered good. The flames on a candle are often described as dancing. Does t.. read more
RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thank you confusing Cantaloupe! That's what I was trying to do: provoke thoughts so I'm glad it work.. read more



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Did you know that you had already made that decision before thinking of its answer? Youve decided yes because of its attraction to you, yes! Shadows grow and hide but will always arrive at the right moment.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

9 Months Ago

I like your interpretation a lot! I didn't notice that until reading your review. You're right thoug.. read more
sometimes simple is all a thing needs to be...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

1 Year Ago

I completely agree! Hope you liked it :)
Chris

1 Year Ago

It was full of meaning
Such a surprise you gave in this poem. And I think I will take the risk

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Let me know where it takes you :)
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Terrence Chang

2 Years Ago

Surely most definitely
if so we do,
What if the intervention results in
Denial and condemn?

loved it :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thank you I'm glad you liked this :D
This is an amazing short piece RiverRei.. join them? I'll be inclined not to...:) brilliant work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Wow thank you Richie you're amazing :D made my day!!!
Passengerr

2 Years Ago

you're welcome.. of course you I am:).
Short and Sweet. Though there's no actual color for shadows it's more like a variety of shade. What kind of dance are they dancing? I will join if its just normal dancing

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

I left it unspecified for the reader's imagination to run wild. It is what you take from it, whether.. read more
I'm very into micropoetry and your piece was great. I think a lot can be conveyed even in the shortest of passages. I liked this one very much, keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Thanks Maria, I'm really glad you enjoyed it :D
I would pull the blanket over my head if I see them dancing, but maybe it's worth trying once. Thank you for sharing this poem. :) Rudi

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

Definitely need to try it at least once :P
Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

2 Years Ago

I guess, but then during a very...very dark night. :)
I really liked this River...do you or dont you? i say yes...never give up a reason to dance...life is too short .lol
Great write!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RiverRei

2 Years Ago

I agree, you aren't living if you aren't taking risks! Thank you Sereena :D

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