Love in the Waiting

Love in the Waiting

A Poem by robcdm
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Love Poem

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Love in the waiting


I wake up and stare out upon the sea

for it is another day and your not here with me

oh i can see you in all your splender

your smile is like the sunrise in early morn upon my eyes

your vioce is like heavenly music upon my ears

your laugh can raise my spirit, and make me soar

but you absence crushes my soul, and make me morn

I feel as if i can touch you but your just out of reach

I feel as if I can speak to you but waves deafen my speach

I feel as if you understand, but yet sea still calls and you must go

Oh how i dread the sea, and its demands

for my life is running short, and my time nears its end

how can i comfort you ,from the beyound

how will I get to tell you these word of mine, after i am gone

how will you feel my love, when my body is no more

I live today becuase i have today but tommorrow is unwritten

I love today for I have today and tommorrow may be forbidden

I am here today becuase God has permitted




By Rob-Jr
March 2007 (All rights Reserved)
 


 
 
 
Creative Commons License
This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.
 

 

 

© 2008 robcdm


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wow, that was amazing. at first i really couldnt get exactly what was being saying but then i could feel the words like i could visualize it as if it was happening to me and i could picture it in my head. I'd like to see more poetry and other sorts of stuff like this.

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