Drunk again

Drunk again

A Poem by robing123456

I dont know how it came to this,
another night out on the piss.
drink until the girls are pretty,
hoping I will get some t***y.

later on, 8 vodkas down,
I see the hottest girl in town,
she smiles and i take this chance,
I go over, start to dance.

I rub my hand inside her thigh,
thinking of a clever lie,
I cant remember what I said, 
an our later we're in her bed.

her sexy body gets some kisses 
and she insists that those aren't blisters,
for an hour we have our fun, 
but that night i should have run. 

I wake up and take a look
at something from a horror book.
is that black hair on her face?
I will have to leave at pace.

I slide pants on and grab my shoes,
the window is the exit i choose.
i jump out, 3 floor drop,
broke my leg but couldnt stop.

I look back, see her grin,
with 6 teeth and a hairy chin,
"same time next week?" I hear her shriek.
"Not a chance, you hairy freak!" 
but next week after a few,
I don't know what I will do.


© 2013 robing123456



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LOL. Nice! The rhythm was great. It had the beat of a Dr. Seuss story, which I find completely awesome with the content considered. ;) I'd love to see it polished up with the consistent flow of capsed letters and the like, but too be honest, I was too busy laughing to really notice. Awesome job ;)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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robing123456

4 Years Ago

Thanks. sometimes the caps get away from me.



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LOL. Nice! The rhythm was great. It had the beat of a Dr. Seuss story, which I find completely awesome with the content considered. ;) I'd love to see it polished up with the consistent flow of capsed letters and the like, but too be honest, I was too busy laughing to really notice. Awesome job ;)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

robing123456

4 Years Ago

Thanks. sometimes the caps get away from me.
Ha-ha! This was wonderfully halarious, hope that was what you were going for!.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

robing123456

4 Years Ago

just brutal honesty. haha thats a lie. its an attempt at something humorous

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