SUNRISE

Sort of a companion piece to "Night Treasure."

Diamond lights

Of gold and red

Rise from night’s

Dark treasure bed,

 

Spread the sky

With coloured beams,

Ending starry

Moonlit dreams.

Reviews

[stansg]

Beautiful poem, its always great to watch the sunrise, and you captured it so well in just two verses.

[Yellowpinch]

This is a beautiful little poem. Very cheery. Thanks

[Marie]

Thanks. I'm glad it cheered you.

[Pax]

i always love the sky in the early dawn, its almost magical and colorful, that is why i am taking pictures whenever i have the chance to capture the moment, and someday i'll be able to paint it... beautiful poetry, Marie, my friend.

[Marie]

Thanks. I hope you do get to paint the sunrise; I know you'll do it magnifiently.

[Miss Sharon]

Oh yes...a beautiful nature write with perfect rhyme, meter and content....you can't beat that! ~Sharon

[Marie]

Thank you--as if I ever saw a sunrise...

[Miss Sharon]

As if you ever saw a sunrise? Either you are a late riser or you are blind. I hope it is the former.

[Marie]

No, I'm not exactly a late riser. But where I live I can't see a sunrise or a sunset either. I have to imagine them.

[Miss Sharon]

I'm sorry to hear that Marie. Fortunately you are an awesome writer with a wonderfully creative imagination so perhaps the sunrises and sunsets you imagine and write about are even better than
those you might see! ~Sharon

[Marie]

THank you. I can actually picture a sunrise or a sunset in my mind.

[wordman]

I am standing in this field looking for aliens the picture is awesome
and loved the colors you portrayed in your poem

[Marie]

Thank you. No aliens here.

[Terpsichore]

Such lovely lines, the photograph is very Salvador Dali and matches perfectly. I would like to wake up
to such a beautiful sight. T

[Marie]

Thank you. I took the photo off the Internet.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a tender world that awakens in your words... a place that floods the soul with light.. and something much needed on this day. Thank you.

[Marie]

THank you very much for your comments.

[Rachelle]

Magic captured in brevity. You are a master of words.

[Marie]

Thank you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You captured the moment perfectly.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Eloquent, exquisite and enchanting.
A lavish 3E production!