CARLOS DID MY YARD!

CARLOS DID MY YARD!

A Poem by Marie
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My yard was an overgrown mess...

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CARLOS DID MY YARD!(Senyru)

 

I saw a jungle

Carlos came with his magic

Now I see beauty.

© 2015 Marie


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Hah-ha, I wish you'd send Carlos over here. Nice words, Marie.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks. Carlos does my yard every spring. Incidentally, he's ot a gardner nore a landscaper. He's a .. read more
And Carlos saw a job to do, and knew exactly how to get it done!!
Clever write that says so much!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I don't know what I'd do without Carlos.
Sheila Kline

8 Years Ago

A good gardener is hard to find!! I am glad you have him to help you!!
I'll never understand how you, poets, can write these tiny Japanese poems and manage to convey a clear idea.
still, a good one Marie. refreshing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks. I was really inspired this time.
Never did a senyru make me feel such joy! I know what it is to have a world overgrown and rambling... and to find help to make it an Eden again? Oh, that's the best!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Carlos does my yard every spring. By that time it really does look lke a jungle.
This is really cool Marie
Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thank you. A great job is what Carlos did.
I'm a big fan of Japanese verse.Always happy to read a senyru or haiku. well done


Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thank you.

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San Antonio, TX



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