RAINBOW

RAINBOW

A Poem by Marie
"

Very short description of a rainbow.

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Rainbow

Arching colour through the skies;

Mist turned into butterflies.

© 2015 Marie


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In the most succinct of terms and with the utmost of respect
might I suggest that your 'Rainbow' took my breath away and
blinded me with beauty

Yep, I loved it..... N

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks; I appreciate the sentiment.
~A perfect image that brings a smile to the reader. This one especially.~

Posted 8 Years Ago


this one made me smile. you are so economical with words and yet you manage to paint such a clear picture with your words.
this is beautiful, Marie.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks. I believe a poem can be robbed of its effectiveness just by being overwritten.
Such gentle words, the perfect accompaniment to a beautiful image.

It's God painting the skies for his Children.

Beccy.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thank you. That's a lovely thought.
This is a very unique interpretation of a rainbow and I liked it a lot

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
Only a poet could see it that way. A remarkable and beautiful couplet.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
A "short description," you write... and yet here you say so much. The enchanted beauty of this misted magic in the skies... it is glorious.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Now that is an original and wonderful way to describe them.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I really liked the imagery of butterflies. Next time I see a rainbow I will think of them. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


............simply beautiful...with magnificent imagery ★

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

My poetry is usually all about imagery.
sunprincess

8 Years Ago

.........truly enjoyed, thanks for sharing :) ★

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Added on June 8, 2015
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Tags: sky, colouor, arching

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Marie
Marie

San Antonio, TX



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