NIGHT SKY

NIGHT SKY

A Poem by Marie
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Description of the night.

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Diamond net of stars

Spread on purple folds,

Scooping up moon silver,

Sun’s reflected gold.

© 2015 Marie


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very beautiful and thought provoking...how small we are in comparison to the beauty of a night sky...

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is yummy. Perfect in it's simplicity, I beg for more..... N

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
What an extravagant sky of light and color... such fires burning and brilliant... How I wish more people would put everything down and just go out at night to spend moments under these stars... Wondrous, Marie.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

People can't always look at stars; that's why I write about them.
Scooping up moon silver,
Sun’s reflected gold....

So poetic & glamorous, you simply rock madam!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
Writer at last! Sky ~

8 Years Ago

Welcome
You used very few words in this piece, and yet you've still managed to make an accurate(and beautiful) description of how wonderful and majestic the sky is on the clearest of nights. This poem is every bit as awesome as the picture you have provided to go with it. Fantastic piece! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thank you. My preference is for very short, tightly rhymed, tightly scanned verse.
your description of the wonders of Nature are breathtaking, Marie. and the pictures you put there are always like the cherry on the cake.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Woody. I took that picture from the Internet
Woody

8 Years Ago

I know. I was complementing on your judicious choice :)
Your words make me wish it was nighttime, to witness the miracle you describe... Beautiful, Marie.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks. I have not actually seeen the sky like this, but I imagine that's what it looks like.
Beautifully said, and exquisitely written ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thank you.

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San Antonio, TX



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