I'M NOT A MORNING PERSON

I'M NOT A MORNING PERSON

A Poem by Marie
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Actually, that's not true...

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I’M NOT A MORNING PERSON

You birds are too loud,

Disturbing my sleep;

Please keep it to

A reasonable cheep.

 

Already the rising

Sun is too bright.

I cover my head

And long for the night.

© 2015 Marie


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I enjoyed this although I'm sort of a morning person! What I found intriguing was that you had ALL CAPS for the first line (which implies yelling on social media) and the next line was that the birds are too loud. Cute! I liked that.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. But the part that was in all caps is supposed to be the title. I should have spaced it.. read more
David Berger

8 Years Ago

Ah, okay. I think it still works well as the first line. ;-)
Mam your poem is actually quite different and presents a different picture of early morning which is mostly appreciated by earlier poets, which is quite impressive.Would have like to read if it was a little long

Posted 8 Years Ago


I didnt think it was true Marie; not for one minute.
lol @ 'reasonable cheep' - great wit my friend.
I like the mornings.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lol! I know a lot of people who would agree with this, Marie - a fun write here! Personally, I am up by 5 every morning, and the birds make me smile... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

I really don't mind the birds singing, or getting up early. But I recognize other people's right to .. read more
Smiling, and realizing that I know a few people just like this. I simply cannot sleep past 5:45 am... so coffee is my first priority... Cheers! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


i have felt like this enough mornings...like the scene in Romeo and Juliet...it's lark, the herald of the morn...and she says come back to bed, it's the nightingale----but no, it's the damn lark...and time to face the reality of the next day.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

I have neither larks nor nightingales in my vicinity, just sparrows.
Very relatable and well-penned
Nice one, Marie!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This like how I was for the first half of my life. Now I get up in time to wake the chickens.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marie

8 Years Ago

Actually, I do my best work in the morning, though I usually up past midnight.
Such a lovely post! Reminds me of the lazy Sunday mornings! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on June 22, 2015
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San Antonio, TX



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