SEA PORTRAIT

Descriptive words...

Rolling

Tolling

Crashing

Clashing

Roaring

Soaring

Weeping

Sleeping

Thrilling

Killing

Golden

Molten

Reviews

[Roxie M]

You have described it well. I like the picture, the font and the rhyme. Thank you.

[Marie]

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[wordman]

a creative write marie,loved the image,i may have borrowed it lol

[Marie]

I took the image off the Internet; anyone can use it.

[wordman]

thank you marie

[rubie]

The sea/beach is one of my favorite places, and I adore poems about it.

I love how you have used structure to create meaning, and your words roll down the page to mimic the waves.

Lovely.

[Marie]

Thanks. I hadn't thought about the words making waves...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that is the sea, in all its personas....and you capture it in a poem that rolls like the waves...

[Marie]

Thank you.

[An owl on the moon]

I love the roaring and crashing of the sea... so like a beast... and you awaken the beast so powerfully with your words.

[Woody]

Gosh! what will you think of next, Marie. love it. I don't remember reading anything like it before.

[Marie]

I never tried to write anything quite like this before.