CHAFFINCH

Not sure what a chaffinch is...

 

 Flash of yellow

Music floats

As if the air

Were starred with notes.

 

Cheering while

You soar and sing

As if a laugh

Had taken wings.

 

Reviews

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

the second is the strongest of the two. it could stand alone. fantastic

[Marie]

THank you. I guess you're right.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they are a cheerful bird, aren't they?

frolicking about....always.

[Marie]

Yes they are cheerful...no problems...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i'd love to be a finch!

[mattavelli]

That's a lovely rhyme, Marie. I've been enjoying the birds this summer.

[Marie]

THanks. I think a chaffinch is the same as a finch.

[mattavelli]

noun:   small European finch with a cheerful song

[Marie]

Okay--thanks.