CHAFFINCH

CHAFFINCH

A Poem by Marie
"

Not sure what a chaffinch is...

"

 

 Flash of yellow

Music floats

As if the air

Were starred with notes.

 

Cheering while

You soar and sing

As if a laugh

Had taken wings.

 


© 2015 Marie



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the second is the strongest of the two. it could stand alone. fantastic

Posted 2 Years Ago


Marie

2 Years Ago

THank you. I guess you're right.
they are a cheerful bird, aren't they?

frolicking about....always.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Marie

2 Years Ago

Yes they are cheerful...no problems...
jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

i'd love to be a finch!
That's a lovely rhyme, Marie. I've been enjoying the birds this summer.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Marie

2 Years Ago

THanks. I think a chaffinch is the same as a finch.
mattavelli

2 Years Ago

noun:   small European finch with a cheerful song
Marie

2 Years Ago

Okay--thanks.

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Added on August 3, 2015
Last Updated on August 3, 2015
Tags: yellow, wings, laugh

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Marie
Marie

San Antonio, TX



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