A Poem by Marie

End of season...


Jeweled wings are ragged now

The time is almost done

Fairy angels end their lives

Dancing in the sun.

© 2015 Marie

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So sorry to hear that you have passed May it not be a dark night but a bright light Like yourself. May you be rocked in the arms of the Almighty to the beat of the lullaby winds.As all the souls of Heaven play a song so kind to the sound of the caroling winds. You have been a great friend to me.You have many great friends who have cried over you. May those tears fall from the heavens like notes from far flung rain to ring out the message you are loved.
Goodnight Marie.

Posted 3 Years Ago

10 of 10 people found this review constructive.


3 Years Ago

I know as I sympathised with you then xx
Tate Morgan

3 Years Ago

Seeing a parent pass away is one of the hardest pains we can endure. may you be blessed with a quiet.. read more
Monster ^.^

2 Years Ago

This is the first time I've heard of this. I'm always thankful to Marie. We haven't really conversed.. read more


I miss you............................

Posted 10 Months Ago

Ah how I delight in all seasons, like life all kinds of trails n tribulations. thanks for this lovely poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Dancing in the sun would be a glorious way to go--for any of God's creatures.
While you rest in God's arms, Marie, your lovely words live on.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, beautiful, charming.

Posted 1 Year Ago

A beautiful job. True to us all.

Posted 1 Year Ago

I was wondering where you were as I also haven't been on this site in quite awhile. Your poems still touch me and even though I never met you personally your kind and great comments have never been far from my mind. You surely have a legacy here at the Writerscafe.

Posted 1 Year Ago

beautiful words for inspiration

Posted 1 Year Ago

Beautiful. I was drawn to her picture. I didn't know she had passed. Good night love rest in peace.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem I must testify has something significant inside. There is another better life after death. The last two lines captured this. Well articulated.

Posted 2 Years Ago

I am not on here as much lately due to many useless things, but as I had time today to read, I thought what better than pick someone I can count on. You did not disappoint. You know I love the short verse and this is excellent. Great imagery and a perfect match for your photo selection. I really enjoyed this work. I had read of your passing and still look back on your work. Even in your absence, you bring a smile to my face. RIP

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on August 17, 2015
Last Updated on August 17, 2015
Tags: wings, jeweled, sun



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