A Poem by Marie

End of season...


Jeweled wings are ragged now

The time is almost done

Fairy angels end their lives

Dancing in the sun.

© 2015 Marie

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So sorry to hear that you have passed May it not be a dark night but a bright light Like yourself. May you be rocked in the arms of the Almighty to the beat of the lullaby winds.As all the souls of Heaven play a song so kind to the sound of the caroling winds. You have been a great friend to me.You have many great friends who have cried over you. May those tears fall from the heavens like notes from far flung rain to ring out the message you are loved.
Goodnight Marie.

Posted 2 Years Ago

9 of 9 people found this review constructive.


2 Years Ago

I know as I sympathised with you then xx
Tate Morgan

2 Years Ago

Seeing a parent pass away is one of the hardest pains we can endure. may you be blessed with a quiet.. read more
Monster ^.^

2 Years Ago

This is the first time I've heard of this. I'm always thankful to Marie. We haven't really conversed.. read more



You must have had the sense, Dear Lady, that your were drawing near the end of the season, and would follow the delicate butterflies on their journey into the beyond. It is with deepest regret that we mark your passing. You leave a void that cannot be filled. Your unique presence and insight is lost to us. We mourn your passing. You cannot be forgotten.

Peace to you, My Friend. You have left an indelible mark on all our lives.

Your friend forever. Highest and last, lifetime marks! Kudos!


Posted 2 Years Ago

Truly a beautiful and haunting write from a fantastic and true voice.
Your words shall live on forever .

Posted 2 Years Ago

May God bless with peace. I will really miss you. You were my first friend. I honoured your friendship

Posted 2 Years Ago

Beautiful work. It shows end not only of butterfly but also of human kind. One can feel the lines. Very beautiful

Posted 2 Years Ago

The seasons are certainly changing Marie. Go with God.

Posted 2 Years Ago

A beautiful last whisper of life on your page. I am so sorry to hear of your passing. I wish you peace. Thank you Tate, for letting me know.

Posted 2 Years Ago

The words of this final poem are like fine gems. Profound and hopeful last words from a wonderful poet who will be deeply missed. RIP, Marie.

Revelation 21:4 "He will wipe every tear from their eyes. There will be no more death’ or mourning or crying or pain, for the old order of things has passed away.”

Posted 2 Years Ago

You are loved, Marie. You will continued to be so.

Posted 2 Years Ago

This poem is a beautiful message for Marie to have left for us. Thank you, Marie, for sharing your words. May you have eternal peace.

Posted 2 Years Ago

My dearest Marie, You were one of the first to welcome me and encourage me when I joined Writers Cafe.
You have always been sincere in your comments when reading my poetry. I shall miss you so very much.
May God in his wisdom place you among his angels.
Rest peacefully, your words will never be forgotten.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on August 17, 2015
Last Updated on August 17, 2015
Tags: wings, jeweled, sun



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