AUGUST BUTTERFLIES

AUGUST BUTTERFLIES

A Poem by Marie
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End of season...

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Jeweled wings are ragged now

The time is almost done

Fairy angels end their lives

Dancing in the sun.

© 2015 Marie


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So sorry to hear that you have passed May it not be a dark night but a bright light Like yourself. May you be rocked in the arms of the Almighty to the beat of the lullaby winds.As all the souls of Heaven play a song so kind to the sound of the caroling winds. You have been a great friend to me.You have many great friends who have cried over you. May those tears fall from the heavens like notes from far flung rain to ring out the message you are loved.
Goodnight Marie.

Posted 8 Years Ago


11 of 11 people found this review constructive.

Seashell

8 Years Ago

I know as I sympathised with you then xx
Tate Morgan

8 Years Ago

Seeing a parent pass away is one of the hardest pains we can endure. may you be blessed with a quiet.. read more
Monster ^.^

7 Years Ago

This is the first time I've heard of this. I'm always thankful to Marie. We haven't really conversed.. read more



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Beautiful work. It shows end not only of butterfly but also of human kind. One can feel the lines. Very beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


The seasons are certainly changing Marie. Go with God.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A beautiful last whisper of life on your page. I am so sorry to hear of your passing. I wish you peace. Thank you Tate, for letting me know.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The words of this final poem are like fine gems. Profound and hopeful last words from a wonderful poet who will be deeply missed. RIP, Marie.

Revelation 21:4 "He will wipe every tear from their eyes. There will be no more death’ or mourning or crying or pain, for the old order of things has passed away.”

Posted 8 Years Ago


You are loved, Marie. You will continued to be so.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem is a beautiful message for Marie to have left for us. Thank you, Marie, for sharing your words. May you have eternal peace.

Posted 8 Years Ago


My dearest Marie, You were one of the first to welcome me and encourage me when I joined Writers Cafe.
You have always been sincere in your comments when reading my poetry. I shall miss you so very much.
May God in his wisdom place you among his angels.
Rest peacefully, your words will never be forgotten.
Clive.


Posted 8 Years Ago


A beautiful poem, so sad to hear that Marie has left us may she rest in peace and continue to write her lovely poems in heaven

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I will miss you dear friend. We shared our love for Texas and for poetry both. You were sunshine on this site. You always spoke your mind and gave options from the heart. Save a place for me at the writers table in heaven. There should be tons to write about up there.


Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Soar in your wings, Marie! Rejoice as you go home into the arms of Our Father. .... And watch over us once in a while....
Thank you for all your wit, wisdom and words....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 17, 2015
Last Updated on August 17, 2015
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Marie
Marie

San Antonio, TX



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