DEATH

A silent tear on cheek, 
For dreams that will never again speak. 
An end of a life.

Author's Note

this is a poem that i wrote for a young friend that unfourtently is no longer with us.

Reviews

[October Oblivion]

*hugs you* I'm sorry...I know that is of no consolation ( I would since words never make anyone feel better...especially after my dad died last year)...but this was an amazing poem. :)

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

This is a beautiful poem. I especially like the line " For dreams that will never again speak ". Is this poem suposed to be a haiku? If so your form is incorrect. It is 5-7-5 syllables, not 5-7-5 words.

[hmm]

sad write, I am so sorry for the loss.