Girls Own Purses

Girls Own Purses

A Poem by rocholo :D
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this is just a silly lil haiku i made up a last year

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I have a Coach purse.

You have a Louis Vuitton?

Ha! Mine is better.

© 2008 rocholo :D


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this one is plain and simple. i love it, because i have two coach purses. but why do you like them better than others? can you explain why in another poem. i would leave this one alone, but expand on the reason in another, it would at least give you a jumping off point to a series of them even. you could have alot of fun with them.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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haha This made me chuckle. It's simple and fun. Well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this one is plain and simple. i love it, because i have two coach purses. but why do you like them better than others? can you explain why in another poem. i would leave this one alone, but expand on the reason in another, it would at least give you a jumping off point to a series of them even. you could have alot of fun with them.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on June 24, 2008
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rocholo :D
rocholo :D

Manila, Philippines



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okay, first i have to admit that my writing isnt very good (or is it "well"? as u can probably tell, my grammar kinda sux) my favorite genre is that japanese poetry that we have all come to know as t.. more..

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