screams of pain

screams of pain

A Poem by just take a breath

we walk hand in hand
and everythings ok

you tell me there is something you need to tell me
there is something you need to say

you close your eyes
then speak the words i dread
"im no longer in love with you" he said

his tone guilty
noticable in his voice

i let go
i run
tears streaming down my face

i fall
to my knees
screaming screams of pain

my stomach clenches
my vision blury
this painful sensation
this feel of fury

i look too the sky
if my heart, god could save
i wouldnt be lying here
screaming screams of pain

i feel delusional
like half of me is gone
i cannot cry any more
because all my fluids are gone

theres no air id want to breath
if im not with this someone
no time i wont feel grief
because you are gone

if your standing in near silence
ten years from now
and you hear a sound of violence
there my screams of pain
thats how they sound.

© 2010 just take a breath


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ooooooooooooooooooooo chilling.. painful love it...im not a fan of pain but this was good.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..

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