if i say...

if i say...

A Poem by just take a breath

were walking a fine line here
things were going so well
then what struck me was fear
with an amount ill never tell

if i say im sorry
will you come back
as if it never happened before?

if i say i hate you
will you leave me
and keep my heart beat to the core?

what if i lied
said things would be ok
would you beat me to the floor

im in love with you
thats no lie
every night i lay in bed
i start to cry

i bow my head down
in cold wet tears
sleeping alone
wishing you were here


if i say i love you
and ment what i said
would you love me too
and we could start again?

© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
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and keep my heart beat to the core? this is my fav line only because it can read like this..
and keep my heart, beat to the core? brilliant poem.. loved it...





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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..

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