sing me to sleep

this isnt suppost to be a poem about hurting that someones gone from your life... but more or less about someone who left for a little while, but is coming back soon...

Tonight, i rest my head down

With the ear buds in my ears

The soft spoken melody

Of our song brings me to tears

-

I close my eyes and form an image

Of the memory once formed…

Of this song

Of mine and yours

-

The poetic voice of an ipod

Brings you back to life

Count, one two three…

And sing me to sleep tonight

Author's Note

every night i fall asleep to my ipod. i literally can not live without it... and every song, every word, every lyric reminds me of this guy im in love with... this isnt suppost to be a poem about hurting that someones gone from your life... but more or less about someone who left for a little while, but is coming back soon...

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[light and ashes]

I think this is so beautiful. I love the last stanza the most because, of when you described the poignant memories that a song brings.

[Emily Rae]

i love the last stanza of this. It read like a lullaby.

[Daydreamer54]

I live it! it seems so placid and sweet! I love the first stanza! great write! ^^

[∂αʌ<..]

i like this poem a lot!
the truth is clearly stated and i like the way you describe how you fall asleep with your ipod!
great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice to have a kind voice to allow you to fall into a deep sleep. I like the way you made your emotion and feelings alive with kind and hopeful words. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote