Golden Sedge Song

Golden Sedge Song

A Poem by Davi Rodrigues
"

This is a ballad-like thing.

"
It was many years ago
     When I heard this tragic tale
Many years it was indeed
     But my memory won't fail

It's the story of a girl
     A girl too sweet for her fate
Her sick mother died too soon
     And her father found a mate

One day the man had to go
     Far away, for he had chores
T'was a long and sad goodbye
     Then he sailed to other shores

For more than a year it was
     Just the women in the house
The wife was freakishly mean
     The girl got thin like a mouse

While the woman broke some toys
     That the girl so carefully kept
The girl drooled over a fig
     Which she ate when the shrew slept

But the poor girl didn't know
     Fruits were counted one by one
When her stepmother found out
     Her rage burned just like the sun

She turned out killing the girl
     Out of greediness and wrath
And she buried the girl's corpse
     Behind the house, near a path

The girl used to have long hair
     Long hair in tresses of gold
The hair grew into a sedge
     Always golden, never old

When the girl's father came home
     He went looking for his kid
But the woman said she fled
     And her big crime she thus hid

The man made peace with his loss
     And he started a horse farm
With the gains from his journey
     He bought a mare and a barn

Let's make hay from all this sedge
     So my mare will become strong
The man said grabbing a scythe
     But he heard a dreadful song

Oh, gardener, please hurt me not
     This sedge by the path is me
Oh, that woman had me killed
     For a fruit of the fig tree

The poor man went home in tears
     He did not hear out the end
While that woman's still alive
     I'll stay here, my soul won't mend

The woman said he was mad
     Still thinking about the girl
She convinced him to forget
     And to buy her a new pearl

Years passed and they had a son
     He was such a clever boy
The girl's ghost now had a chance
     To find her eternal joy

Everyday she would sing songs
     When the boy walked by her side
He was so touched by her voice
     He asked the sedge how she died

The poor boy could not believe
     What he heard about his mom
He swore to the girl he'd kill
     The woman he had come from

On the night of Halloween
     The boy's father wasn't there
And the beldam was asleep
     It was time to make things fair

The boy looked for a sharp knife
     That was fit to commit crimes
And he cut her mother's throat
     As he heard the midnight chimes

Right then his father came back
     To find his wife dead in bed
And his son was watching lights
     From the golden sedge, now red

The man killed himself so sad
     And the boy jumped off a cliff
This is how this story ends
     Four bodies all dead and stiff

© 2012 Davi Rodrigues


Author's Note

Davi Rodrigues
This is one of my saddest productions, I guess. Portraying the stepmother as evil is a bit cliché, but you'll see it's not like children tales.

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a nicely told story

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on December 17, 2012
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Tags: fairy tale, ghost, ballad, murder, death

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Davi Rodrigues
Davi Rodrigues

Brasilia, DF, Brazil



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