I Don't Want To Go

sometimes there is no choice

I don't want to go;

You've lost enough.

Those who loved you,

Those whom you loved.

Now again you must suffer,

But I know you'll get through.

You are strong.  You are brave.

But for now, I must leave you.

Reviews

[Aethereal]

I enjoyed the pyramidal form of this poem. Sometimes we don’t want to go, but we must for our own good. Here’s a tiny inspired gift poem for you:

Freedom

Parting is sweet sorrow,
but we must be free.
You shall brave tomorrow
if you still love me.

[Rogie-Dodge]

Thanks .. and thanks for the poem
I thought that form gave a visual image of strength, like a mountain.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! I've written many rhyming poem with the mountain form such as "Coffee".