RUNAWAY STAR

NONE WHATSOEVER.

                                                         RUNAWAY STAR

In the winter murk,

Along the turf,

standing alone,

Unheard and unharmed,

looking at the starry sky,

with infinite possibilities,

I see a shooting star,

Burning with ardor,

Desolate and driven,

That astronomical marvel,

With it's majestic tail,

Made a sudden trail,

So near yet so far,

Moments later,

It was gone,

Unheard and unharmed.

Author's Note

One of the random stuff.

Reviews

[Kotite]

I really like the parallels between you and the star and how when it comes down to it we're here and gone in a flash; or in your case, there and gone in a flash. I didn't see any of the recent reviews touch on the fact that you used the same line to describe your coming there to the star appearing so I just thought I'd note that and give ya some credit ^.^

[Darkgirl]

I could almost see it, well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice visions create by the poem. The sky and stars can make us wish upon a star and hold hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Vidya Bacchus]

Nice and simple I really like Bing :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Random yes but completely still and guided, well done.

[Chandler bing]

thank you.