My beautiful woman and our forever tomorrow.

I still reminisce those long walks at night,
the beach then would be so quiet,
I held your hand and pulled you close,
and so did the moon to sea across the shore
Searching your sky blue eyes for something,
Whilst warm summer breeze flowing akin,
your lips parted a smile so serene,
And that's how I found what was gone.

I knew it then loving you would never,
be a simple question to comprehend,
I never wanted those days to end,
while looking at our tomorrow forever.

Reviews

[Akshay Rawal]

This line is the highlight of the whole poem-

I knew it then loving you would never
be a simple question to comprehend'

Good stack of words. Gives a light unnoticable smile on the reader's face.

[Sylvia Chika]

Nice poem...I like the title.

[tiajam]

Beautiful, it just has such a relaxed safe tone

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

It is excellant . What a love would desire than what you depicted . Keep it up.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

This rhymes really well the rhythm is consistent.

[nazia]

Beautiful, fluid and crystal clear expression of emotions.. Way to go Chandler :)

[I Am Svetlana]

"I knew it then loving you would never,
be a simple question to comprehend, "

I love these lines simply because no one is easy to comprehend or figure out. It takes time to see and understand someone's heart. It takes time to let love grow, it burns if you try to rush it. Such a beautiful setting you made with this and such a true message.

[Sreenath]

splendid write apt mixture of emotion and right words ..... i was living the words as i read this awesome one loved reading it ... keep smiling .. peace :)

[Abdul Aziz]

Very well written. I quite liked the transition between sentences, the cadence of your phrases and the evocative imagery. "a smile so serene" is the only phrase I can take a modicum of objection to, as it sounds too archaic when compared to the rest of the poem.