freedom

About freedom i guess

Freedom will fall when few recall

the meaning and sense of nature and nurture

Freedom has fallen, but no longer calls 

for brave men and soldiers to fight

Freedom now reigns, with queens and dames

and feels less the falling it had

Where freedom will go, I cannot know

But, of one thing I am certain

the freedom within, will always win

and conquer the dragons who burn.

Author's Note

A whim of writing, let me know if it was a good one or if it stinks! :)

Reviews

[Ian]

That...was...awesome!!!
Great job!
I like how you change up this poem by making it rhyme on the same line (hehe) instead of on the next line... or the next.
I love it! Great work!