Kiss Me

Feelings produced by my boyfriend ^-^

Kiss me on the rock outside,

Beneath the stars where we hide.

Kiss me long, hard, and deep;

Where afterwards will come no sleep.

Kiss me. Make me cling to you,

And long for all the things you do.

Kiss me. Don’t you go again.

I want you, though it’s a sin.

Kiss me. You’re the one I want;

‘Cause when you don’t, the feelings haunt.

Kiss Me.

Reviews

[MOON]

Passionate write.

[....]

This is so sweet, loving and fun.
Such a wonderful write.

[Jeffery-Maximilian-Kolb..]

Very Wonderfully Wrote, and very Passionate and Romantic

[Chris]

A "fun" little rhyme.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Great emotions and imagery, awesome job! :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Loving, touching piece. Nicely done.

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

I love the flow and feeling of this!