A side of me never known

A side of me never known

Desires, wants, feelings…etc.

Looking in the looking glass, never looking back.

Seeing shadows dance just out of sight.

Lights flickering, never casting a shadow.

Wind blowing in the still of the night.

Kisses felt but never touched.

Heart beating in a body that’s never alive.

 

All these things I feel without knowing.

Everything I know is without feeling.

To feel once more is past my helpless soul.

For one breath of your Love I would surrender all of who I am.

If I smile, I would bleed.

 

If I felt someone’s look of passion, I would bear my soul for the world to see.

To have but a taste of Love, I would bake my desires in to a tasty treat for the one who would love this soul that is I.

 

P.S.     Could you Love me unconditionally without judging, changing, comparing, or ordering me?

          To Love me is to give of yourself completely without regret or remorse.

To ask that I give to you, all of who I am, the good and the ugly parts of me that I hide; is to seek who I am and wish to make me complete.

Reviews

[dw817]

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Few things in this world are unconditional, Ron. If someone says they will love you unconditionally, then they have committed themselves to you - and that is beautiful - but the human mind and mood is ever and always subject to change.

Love is and always will be a subject of reflection and in some cases, objection. Just make it work for you - like anything else in the world. As long as you are content with the results - it matters naught for little else. :)

[Cryingkate]

All is Well Ron,

Geez, I hear many words coming to mind, but none can say it any better then:

Come sit down and have some of these apple pies while they are still warm. Here now let me alamode that with some good old fashioned french vanilla Ice cream.
Bring your laundry and let me get those stains out for ya and give em a creasing.
No now you just sit right there and rest a spell. Besides Sam Dickens is coming over and I'm sure he'd like to meet you he has some stories I tell ya that'll make your hair curl and set your heart a whirl.
He was just a young'n when I saw him last.
It was here in this cafe.

The world can be mighty cold and lonely at times Ron but one thing to remember , Somewhere there is somebody watching out for you and when you think it can't get any colder that's when the warm blazes come in and surprising you off guard and filling you again with love and hope , Just enough to get you to your next destination.
Don't you worry your head now and getting sleeplessness,Love will Find You !

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[ron]

Sam Dickens, really. I would be in good company with him and you sitting by my side holing my arm.
I know they say will find those who wait. But it would be a long lonely road to the one who would love me. take heart dear traveler, life will be what it is in the sunrise and full moon of our travels.

[Cryingkate]

We are all just travelers on one Journey. The roads may be many but they all lead Home.
It would tickle me pink to sit close even arm to arm But it wouldn't be for long, cause after I get done feeding you , You won't go to far. You'll soon be filled and will be so comfortably content that it wouldn't take much convincing to get your boots off and get you on the couch feet up and soft pillow. Then I'd get my guitar out and sing you some of my Maiden songs and you'd soon be fast asleep. I'd keep the fire going in case you should awaken in the night. You won't be able to fight the feeling of Home. Ahh all is good! We have friends that Love us and food for the tummy and a roof over our head and no worries of being cold. That's all we really gotta have.
When we are content and attitude of gratitude the flood gates open for more.

Who's got it better then us?

You wrote: life will be what it is in the sunrise and full moon of our travels. well funny as I sat down the Big Moon caught my eye and when I started out the day you were part of my Wonderful Morning.
I sure enjoyed the day with you.
Thanks for making my Day so Wonderful ! I felt the agape love The kindred Spirit, the Commrade Journeymenship .. :-) (Hows that for a new word :-))
Who has to wait?????

[ron]

Wow. That was amazing. How was that...? That was utterly amazing. It sounds like love. it sounds like Amazement. It sounds like something I would love to be a part of.

[Cryingkate]

" Think,That Which Is, and It Is So" :-)

[s y e]

This is so powerful Ron. When you read into it more you get a bigger meaning... I am blown away dude, this was fantabulous - I loved this so much!

[ron]

Thank you Sye. I was going through a bad time when I wrote that...and in some respects I am still going through that.

[s y e]

Well you already know I am going to kick the dark times away from you and try my best to keep you happy and smiling. :-)

[ron]

You already do sweet Sye. You have made me smile and have filed my heart so completely today. I have not the right to ask nor expect more. I am filled with the love you have given me.

[s y e]

Then my job is done, dude. :-)

[ayosonolowo]

Nice writting Ron
i really like that

k,udu...s

[ron]

Thank you.

[Emilie Renee Barnum]

I can definitely relate to this, excellently written!

[ron]

thank you.

[Sheila Kline]

I read your words and come to the conclusion that what you are saying is summed up so vividly in these lines:

All these things I feel without knowing.
Everything I know is without feeling.
To feel once more is past my helpless soul.

You want so much for this person to see you for who you are, to love you as is given to you, to understand the all of you - strengths and weaknesses as you would love them.
There is much angst and hoping..........so much hoping!
Very well expressed!!

[ron]

Thank you so much. Your words mean a lot to me. Thank you for reading.

[ron]

That is true. I guess I have yet to find that one person that we can give our selfs to unconditionaly. Thank you for reading.

[Sami Khalil]

A strong and powerful write. Feelings are real and evident...:)

[ron]

I never knew how much writing poetry has allowed me to express things I have kept from others for so long. thank you for reading.

[Sami Khalil]

Good to let out...You are welcome...:)