Through Isolation

Through Isolation

A Poem by roobato
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A poem about the new ways of life.

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From the shining beams, I see crows flying out.
Walking towards the light, I sense something new.
Rather, a lack of fear I once knew.
I go, with my head held high and resolve bursting through.
I fear nothing.
I challenge everything.
I am in control.
Nothing in the world can stop me. Nothing.

A voice that I once known, swollen with jealousy, asks angrily:
"Realize your foolish ignorance and pride."
But I know better, for that is the weakness of my former fool.
Wiser and older, I push forward, ignoring all the pain and wrongdoings.
Looking back at mistakes, I realize the wrong:
Focusing on individual strokes, instead of the whole framed picture,
Through isolation, this is the way I've been.
Through isolation, this is the way I've become.

© 2015 roobato



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roobato
Any feedback appreciated!

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I enjoyed this! Some quick advice would be try and be a little more consistent with your flow and rhyming. It seemed like one line you would rhyme, and the next you wouldn't. I find reading my stuff out loud really helps me focus on the flow of my writing! Overall great stuff! Keep it up.

Posted 2 Years Ago


roobato

2 Years Ago

Ah thanks for the review!

Also thank you for the advice. I'm still developing my sty.. read more

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Kingston Upon Thames, Surrey, United Kingdom



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I'm a Polish guy living in England. My passion is Computer Science but I love writing as a hobby, so here I am. more..

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