A star falls down in Lake Harmonic-minor

A star falls down in Lake Harmonic-minor

A Poem by poetry-kiddo alienbaba
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An inspired Lyric and melody recorded during the simultaneous occurrence of a sad event elsewhere bu not known to me at that time...

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Ontrolailem noketr jednam sokol podta voir molbar thavn tukam zai poitem mag tukam tem jerul meltelem
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Did you know now... in the night sky..when a star falls..from the heavens..you can make..make a wish...when a star falls down...

Ontrolailem noketr jednam sokol podta voir molbar thavn tukam zai poitem mag tukam tem jerul meltelem
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poetry-kiddo alienbaba
A lyric and song in Konkani the language of Goa but also rendered for your exclusive listening pleasure in the middle verse in English.

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"Did you know now... in the night sky..when a star falls..from the heavens..you can make..make a wish...when a star falls down..." reminds me of my 18th birthday celebration. I made a wish when I noticed a shooting star in the clear sky.......:)
thank you for sharing:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"Did you know now... in the night sky..when a star falls..from the heavens..you can make..make a wish...when a star falls down..." reminds me of my 18th birthday celebration. I made a wish when I noticed a shooting star in the clear sky.......:)
thank you for sharing:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stars falling in the night sky - inspired music and poetry from you. Its been awhile. Good to read you again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

9 Years Ago

why..thank you my dear...and likewise
Beauti-full my friend...hope you are well :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

9 Years Ago

Dear Poppy I am happy and fine :) thank you. I hope you have your happiness with you too..
Ruth

9 Years Ago

Benn up and down with that, but smiling...thanks hon..
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

9 Years Ago

very difficult to fathom
"When you wish upon a star" The catch phrase of the all mighty monolithic institution known as Disney. That's some Ax you're holding in that pic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

9 Years Ago

Thank you Mr.Ricochet I will be associated with Disney one day then :)
Its a sit-guitar :)read more
It's been like forever since last you were here my friend... It IS good seeing you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the star will fall, the wish will rise...

and hopefully the heaven's will hear the voice...



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

9 Years Ago

Thank you sir Jacob:) You are always very kind

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