333 million years

333 million years from now...we will be still the same

333 million years...am I me [email protected]

Spirits fly in the midnight air

And you know...everything time you look up there

They see you every time you look up there

Spirits fly in the air...in the midnight air..

And every time you look up…Look up there...

They bless you and so you could bless them too

To have a safe journey into the afterlife

From the darkness into the light

The bright white light...of truth...

 

And so you could wish them 'Bon Voyage' my friend

It's just the beginning not the end of their journey

Magnificent, marvelous, charming soul of your

Brother, of your sister, your granny, your grandpa,

Your father your mother your cousin..

Your wife, your husband your children...

Your in-laws, your neighbors..Your friends

 

'Bon voyage' my friend till the end..

And I wish you a happy journey

And all good that you've ever wanted in this life...

To the next…333 million years from now!

Author's Note

tell me true

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

needs some editing, but a real journey into that realm of possibilities after we die...will we become part of the universe, the galaxy, just the earth...the spirit world...lots to imagine as possibilities but the best philosophy of this poem is to just live it the fullest that you can.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Jacob sir thank you kindly for your precious time and effort in reviewing. I shall edit the font and punctuation and more if i can find where..how are you doing

[Riddhi]

I liked this poem..actually i liked the way you carved all your ideas in this poem with the help of powerful words...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing..
Riddhi

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

you are really a good poet yourself to realize the meaning in mine...im happy you wrote your exams well...

[Riddhi]

Thank you......

[Holly Mason]

I miss you...until the end
333 million years...to those we miss
May I include my dog Howard...
From my light to yours xoxo

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

please do Holly sorry bout doggie