Maybe I am human

Maybe I am human

A Poem by poetry-kiddo alienbaba
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When good health plays truant...

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When good health leaves my side
Like an unwilling young bride
I wait and wonder; I yearn
And patiently await her return 
From alien-pastures yonder
And these moments of desolation will long be gone
And systems may fail and resume their rotation 
What could possibly be more disastrous than
losing the insane-sanity of my miraged-mind
Not knowing where to find another being; being one of a kind
But I know I'll be back where I was and there is nothing to fear
Having survived the wrath of lashing rain, lightning and thunder

 

…Sometimes I like to think I'm human…



© 2015 poetry-kiddo alienbaba



Author's Note

poetry-kiddo alienbaba
I wrote this one for you after a long hiatus.
I hope you write in to say hello...sometimes...
image courtesy http://oakflatsanglican.com/2014/11/23/the-runaway-bride/

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I really liked and enjoyed this poem...Great work...Personally , i do liked the main theme around which this poem revolves..eager to read your next writing...keep on writing and thanks for sharing...
Riddhi

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

1 Year Ago

dear Riddhi..im so glad you connect with the theme..i will write more and read you too thank you for.. read more
I can feel that there is a lot of personal experience that you are going through in this poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

1 Year Ago

thx friend Cox...its a spur of the moment thing
This is truly a journey within itself. Through all the downs, it's so full of hope.
This is amazing, well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

1 Year Ago

Thx Bluefire...so happy u see itthat way
Bluefire

1 Year Ago

No problem.
Great metaphor as our in our health we seem to always think of ourselves as young and healthy and when the systems fails we wait for a return to our happiness and the thoughts of our youth. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

1 Year Ago

I am glad you grasped the point in its simplicity Mr.Willard...
i am a coming to see your pag.. read more
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

1 Year Ago

Thx Mr.Wells
kind of relating to this right now....really like the metaphor of the reluctant bride. Also really like the "insane-sanity"
nice oxymoron...

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

1 Year Ago

Jacob sir...I knew you would be here first and thank you for the kindness...oxymoron sounds good...l.. read more

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