A Cross to Bare

Inspiration from reading Poppysilver ...a Writer of Merit...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Standing delivered, reaching. For a never ending dream
surreal is the appeal salvation, as reality. Screams
shell shocked. To find the path revealed, sealed
there is no way out, no repentance pealed
our perception back, to unlikely scenes
played out. This passion plays remorse
of course, of course I see only me
standing at its shore forelorn, I
long to know more... no more
tis blinding, this revealed.
To read and ponder the everlonger and feel, through that. Which is seen.

Projected, for the eternal soul. Spirit rides, the seventh tide....
and I shiver... [The grave can wait]

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

And such inspiration indeed, Rory. What a vastness to your words.. taking us across life.. the dreams unfulfilled.. the days yet to come.. Reaching for more, there is a sense of loneliness here.. longing... What a wondrous flow and form you've given this piece, and then flooded it with brilliant imagery and depth!

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that's so powerful...searching for enlightment..loved this..

[sayandeep kundu]

This is terrific.
"Projected, for the eternal soul. Spirit rides, the seventh tide....
and I shiver..."
amazing...
time to tune into DT n "the Spirit Carries on..."

[Kymoo]

When I read this, I could only think of the book of revelation, from the bible.
something which is coming, which will be delivered by the seven angels. The end of life as we know it.
Our inner soul wishes for salvation and we want to know all the answers to this mystery, and at the same time we fear it.
Of course this is how I read your piece, which is great.

[Praiser]

Wonderful !!!!!!written

[thoughts of jade]

the words you use are powerful...it has such depth...its really great

[Emotionally Blank yet F..]

This is really amazing! I love it and the form is great and ugh! I love it :)

[Tate Morgan]

You seem able to make poetry in any formation like a magician

[Tony]

Sometimes I think I would have been better off remaining ignorant, and then I think what an awful waste of life that would be.
I like the way this poem feels like a thoughtstream.

[Freeman]

I love your style of writing , a joy to read.

Freeman

[SM Davis]

This piece rivals those of Frost. Very well written.

This passion plays remorse
of course, of course I see only me
standing at its shore forelorn, I
long to know more... no more
tis blinding, this revealed.

amazing! 100 daisies!