Saying Goodbye

Saying Goodbye

A Poem by rosesofgrey

Our voices have long since stopped echoing

No glares or cold looks do we share

Common courtesies are respected at all times

Never do we lose our tempers with each other

But I wish that just once your facade would crumble

So I’d know you still felt something for me


You’ve stopped checking in with my friends

I’ve stopped calling your mom every Sunday morning

The belongings are back to their rightful owners

Our mutual friends never bring us up to each other

But I wish that just once they would

So I could ask how you have been lately


The letters and messages have disappeared

The photos are hidden in an old shoe box

One of your old shirts is hidden in the back of my closet

You, however, returned every one of my things

But I wish you hadn’t returned everything

So I’d have an excuse to speak you one more time


The goodbye letters are still unfinished

Lying in my little desk drawer, addressed to you

Waiting for me to be able to finish just one

To tell you everything and to apologize

For even the love that we once shared

Was merely an unfinished poem

© 2017 rosesofgrey


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This poem really got to me. It's very powerful and tender. I can feel your pain...definitely politeness is worse than being real and showing what's raw.

Posted 7 Years Ago


rosesofgrey

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!
The meaning and emotion behind this is amazing, i can truly feel it when I read this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rosesofgrey

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words!

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rosesofgrey
rosesofgrey

Albany, OR



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I'm an eighteen year old math major from Oregon. I love to write on occasion, and this is some of my old writing, as I don't post most of my recent writing. more..

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