THE LOOMING MOON

THE LOOMING MOON

A Poem by R. A. Merritt
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A poem about werewolves

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THE LOOMING MOON
By R. A. Merritt


The looming moon in the night 

A pale cold vision within my sight 

Staggering beauty it may be 

And I know I should surely flee 

For it is full perfectly round 

And soon enough that wretched sound 

That wretched sound that eerie howl 

And soon enough a frightful growl 

The lust for blood will soon arise 

And none about will be surprised 

For it is certain the lycanthrope

Will feel its lure and then erupt 

And burst about upon the scene 

And do what it must that brutal fiend 

And with fangs flashing bright 

Will pursue its victims throughout the night 

Bringing death the very worse 

To fill its need its terrible thirst 

Neither neighbor nor greatest friend 

Can alter the beast that dwells within 

Within the soul the crushing sea 

The curse of this lycanthropy 

What shall be done what course to take 

Knowing this curse shall never break 

And so he shrinks within his cave 

And were it so it'd be his grave 

Forever free from this dreadful sight 

That once a month will incite 

Incite his soul to lurid deeds 

And all he encounters lies and bleeds 

Go away and come no more 

That looming moon I so abhor 

Free the one that comes each time 

That fosters blood like flowing wine 

Free him God from your heavenly doom 

And cast away that looming moon 

Free him God I do plea 

For the lycanthrope is 'er but me

© 2014 R. A. Merritt


Author's Note

R. A. Merritt
Of all the movies or read about these mythical creatures they always seem to filled with regret at what they have become.

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Impressive, you turned a cliche topic into something quite profound with descriptive flair, not florid, or garish, with sensory detail that abets a connotative sorrow, and a flow unhindered by any lack of adroitness. You have skill, and are deserving of merit: And truly, it is a pleasure to find such a pleasantly surprising read. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


R. A. Merritt

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much for a very literate critique of this poem. I hope you will avail yourself of so.. read more

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R. A. Merritt
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Rocky Point, NC



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