Night Feelings

A kiss, a touch

A hidden shadow flits

A flame of desire licks

Like a blindfold over my eyes

I can only feel...

Nothing more then feelings

Feelings assault my senses

The breeze on my skin,

Turns into the breath of you

The ache of my arms,

Turns to your tight hold on me

The brushing of my hair,

Turns to kisses from you

On my face, my neck

Teasing me to the brick of madness

 

But alas... everywhere I turn

I can not see you

 

Reviews

[H. A. M.]

"But alas� everywhere I turn
I can not see you"
I love this ending line. It underscores everything else with the desire for the other person. Also the hightened senses at night can be a nusance. Great imagery on that. This is a write of passion and I like it!

[Vatsayayana]

Gorgeous imagery!
I can interpret this in so many ways.
A lover. The night breeze.
Just beautiful. Your words are strong and the free flow beautifully.
I had to read this aloud to get the full impact.
You're a beautiful writer with a delicious outlook and interpretation on the world around you.
I await more of your work! :) :) :)

[Twilight Dancer]

Romantic; softly sensual; love, longing - maybe loss or maybe searching. Lovely write ... TD :)

[T. L. O'Neal]

This poem had a real bittersweet quality to it, as if the love was lost but the emotions linger. The last two lines really had a punch to them. Excellent piece. T

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

Very beautiful poem. Short and lovely. Excellent! ^_^

[Sea Dreams ~marina~]

This is bloody awesome!!! Get this one out there and show everyone. Dreamy, romantic and sensual. I really enjoyed it. Perhaps another stanza, but then again, it is quite powerful on its own. Excellently written.
- M

[Marie]

Love the details. Nicely done.